All Over

Picture this, at 8:00 A.M. in the morning, after late night party, you are dragged out of bed expected to walk around and flip on some bars with your hands for a WORLD WIDE CHAMPIONSHIP that you forgot about. One more thing to go with this, ever heard the term " If you fall of the horse, the only thing to do is get back on"? I would love it if you understood WHAT gets you back on the horse. I mean, if nothing did, the horse would stroll away leaving you behind. How? Presenting my independent narrative writing piece with only a few pinches of help! Just read on!

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  1. Preston H.21 October 2013 at 01:51

    Good job Anushka, I like how instead of using he or she said you used other things.
    I think you could work on Dialogue though.

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