Ever Made a Bad Choice?


Most people think that I am a nice, like able person. But is that really who I am with everyone? Or do I treat other people not as well. There is a part of me that I didn't know about, or let alone think about, until the day that everything happened. Find out what has taken me ages to concentrate the true feelings, of this 10-15 minute moment, which believe it or not, has taken me a month or so to finish. That is how important it is to revise and make sure it is fun to read. Please read on and find out what a 2 cookies, a chair, and good angel, can change. Will I be able to make a good choice?

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  1. Anonymous1 October 2013 at 20:53

    Your detail was amazing! You did a great job Anushka.

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  2. Anonymous19 October 2013 at 02:37

    I like your story a lot! Basically every kid has this moment. Your word choice is great!

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