Fire, Fear and a Pinch of Magic

When I learned that I could write a story of any genre a wished, I already had my story planned. Can you guess what genre I chose? That isn't really a hard question if you just look at my title. I chose fantasy! This was independent, which means that I did this without much help. This is also the last writing unit of the year! My fantasy story is about a girl named Mica who finds this tree which takes her... you know what? (without any further ado) Just read the story and find out what happens!

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  1. Anonymous1 June 2014 at 20:33

    I think your story is great. I loved the plot. I also liked how you made the characters explain the lesson or the moral of this story. You added a lot of details to make the story really clear and I really liked that. Good job!

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  2. Anonymous1 June 2014 at 20:34

    Good job on your story. I couldn't find any grammar/vocab mistakes. Although, I don't get why 'strike' would tell the villagers that he was going to burn the tree. Other than that, you did a good job. Keep up the good work.

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  3. Anonymous1 June 2014 at 20:51

    I thought your story was spectacular! The plot was clear, the message was a good one, and you had some interesting twists in it. Keep up the great work!

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