Wow! I get a chance to choose between 2 superpowers! This is kind of a hard choice, I mean, invisibility. Imagine all of the things you could use that amazing skill for. Flight. It just sounds so amazing. However, I think I would go with flight. If you are wondering why I have chosen this, keep on reading (I hope this can convince someone who disagrees with me!). The first reason I chose flight is because, it is something I have always wanted to do. It sounds so exciting and fun-filled. Picture this, you slowly start rising higher and higher into the air. The breeze is cool, and the sun is beautiful and golden. Small birds are chirping around you, while you look down and see a wonderful view of people skittering around. You could even rise up into a cloud, even though that might not be the best idea if it seems stormy. You can surprise your parents and friends all the time. Can't you imagine their shocked appearance? I would be using this on my little brother a lot (evil grin)!...
Connor
ReplyDeleteI barely could hear anything most of the time so I couldn't analyse much, please fix it.
Hey! Great movie! There were some ups and downs. So first, the good things you did:
ReplyDeleteI liked it how everyone in your group seemed to be working hard on this, and no one was left out. Another thing - I liked it how you acted out everything, You showed what it actually looked like.
But sadly, there were several bad things. Many of them were little, but two things that stood out was the small lack of editing and the voice level. About the editing: When you're acting, it's key that you edit the parts out where you get up and click to stop the camera. You want to make it look as natural as possible. For the voice level, it was somewhat annoying trying to strain to hear. But overall, I think that you did a pretty good job! Nice work.
The one that I would least likely use is Ignore Them.
ReplyDeleteThe one that I would most likely use is Confront Them.
I really liked your acting to make the viewer interested in the subject. Although throughout the video, I could barely hear what you guys were saying. Next time you guys need to speak up so that the audience can hear you. Other than that, your video was great!
ReplyDeleteI was especially impressed with how your evidence was so specific and it was easier to understand
ReplyDeleteYou might have improved by making it relate more to the audience because the things you said about gossip doesn't really fit me.
The strategy/tool I would most likely use is asking other people if the topic fits them because it would be irrelevant if it doesn't fit the audience.
The strategy/tool I would least likely use is talking off the notes because it makes the presentation boring if you do.
I really liked how most of your tips were very revelant and impactful.
ReplyDeleteYou could have been clearer, if you had spoken more loudly.
1. For a large part of the video, the voices were very soft and not very clear.
2. You could have recorded in a more quiter setting, since at times the background sounds were quiet loud.
3. You can't clearly understand what is taking place, until you read the short blurb that follows the story.
A strategy I really liked is #4, which is to confront the gossiper, since this is a great way to show that you are not scared and you are willing to stand against them.
A strategy I would least likely use, is #5, because I beleive that gossiping should not be done.
By Dhruv