Water Project Presentations

Luca and Thomas

Well Done: Really clear and interesting

One Wish: That they didn't stutter as much

Takeaway: To maybe just practice a little more

Greg

Well Done: you added some good details so that you showed that you really cared about it.

One Wish: You could have put less information on the slides and more pics

Takeaway: Keep the amount on the slides shorter but it was very heartfelt.

Lance

Well Done: There were a lot of details on what you did

One Wish: more pictures

Takeaway: You really worked hard and raised a lot of money

Andrew

Well Done: Natural and not jittery at all

One Wish: More of a logical order

Takeaway: It was really creative to do that and he isn't that nervous

Hailey


Well Done: You put in lots of information

One Wish: that you had more photos

Takeaway: Take away unneeded information

Alex

Well Done: you added all the information you need

One Wish: You could have increased your volume

Takeaway: Take away things you don't need

Nadia


Well Done: lots of informations

One Wish: A bit more prepared

Takeaway: Cut out things that aren't required

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